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llnotion
Chapter 5
Disclaimer: this review is simply my opinion and is no way infringing on your right to your own opinion, values and/or beliefs. This is purely something I have decided on and is not meant to spark any debate or discussion over this topic.
Main points: The faster pace and uninviting artwork makes this story low tier. The author couldn’t think of much when creating this and dived in with only a general premise of what they wanted it to be.
Artwork: The artwork is nowhere near on par with even some of the most brain dead webtoons out there. It is even debatably worse than that of Chinese manhua’s which are known for their kiddy stories and terrible translation along with their distinct art which easily tells you if you are reading one.
Story: The story was rushed with little to no character development so far. The story from the beginning to this point could have been stretched out by 10 or more extra chapters to build character, tell us reader the whole backstory, give us more context instead of rushing an elf guy in and bam now everyone excepts the world is invaded done deal no more questions.
Conclusion: This story is lacking and is made from what I can tell a very new author accompanied by an artist whose art style does not compliment this webtoon in the slightest. It is not a very enjoyable read and I wouldn’t recommend reading further.
Rating: I will give this a (15-20/100) which for my ratings is the equivalent of a “time waster” simply because there is no aspect to bring out a work that you would take time away from something important to read.